Monday, April 23, 2007

Do you fancy...SOME POETRY?!?

~~~Universal Flow~~~

Under the glow of the sunset
pink, orange, golden-calling sea vision --
the music in the wind reaches
and awakens you.

You swim past the shallows,
down, down, deep.

The tumultuous tide pauses in your eyes,
all briny depth,
as sea shadows
amaze with their reflection.

Ignoring the moon's pull,
you dive in to touch
the shimmer of an abandoned past.

The cusp of dusk, now,
and you draw yourself ashore.

Leaving the sun,
and the sea,
and their song,
you slide through the twilight
and briefly hear the trees whisper in a breeze's sigh --
about the emerging starry night
looking like deep-sea starfish
you remember
from somewhere.

3 comments:

Chiv said...

Journey - nice. The flow of the poem is very dreamlike.

T h e C o o l e s t said...

Wow, that was -extremely- dream like. I don't even like poetry, and I still felt enlightened and pleased. =P

journeyinfinite said...

Machiavelli -- Thx :-) I tried to format the poem in "waves" which mimic the tide and being carried with a flow -- like being in a dream.